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Danger In The Forest - Jacob

Welcome to my story you'll need to hold onto your hats because you will find this exiting
(it is emotional)

It goes down Lady's Combe to two holly bushes please get your smartphone out and set off on your quest.
 
Chapter one

The Start Of Everything :)

Welcome back to my story.

First you need to go over to the the other side of the road to a marker post.
The first thing that will happen is your Smart Phone, I Pad or Phone will ping and the story will pop up.

Now cross the road and and please read my story and I'll see you at the end of the story byeee. :)
 
Chapter two

Chapter 1 Food I Need Food

I was a handsome, dashing, red male deer. I was proud of being a well-known deer that kept on getting more and more handsome over the long years. I had a scratching tree that those annoying, nasty, and non-thinking humans call oak tree that was really spiky at the time of this tale.

I was looking for a patch of green yummy grass but all the plants I could see was the tough, yucky, green, black berried wartleberry plant I gazed at the tree and I just wanted to scratch. But no I couldn't I needed food.

I just trotted down the great hill to the other side the muddy, ugly and watery ditch.
 
Chapter three

Chapter 2 grass Yummy

Soon, my piercing blue eyes spotted a patch of green, silky, yummy grass 10 or 20 yards away. I knew that I need to get there to live off the grass in the distance.
So, I headed into land and started eating the tasty green grass that was the best I had in days.
It was even better than my mummy's grass soup (yuck!) But what I didn't know that I was heading into a battle between the incredible, strong and victorious Lios Alfa and the nasty, black, horrible and weak, Svart Alfa that just wanted the treasure of the Lios alpha king.

It was terrible I even wanted my Mummy. That was was really childish and stupid.
 
Chapter four

Chapter 3 I'm Going To Die!

When the Lios alpha saw me they just sprang from their mouldy old buttress and stared at me for 1 hour. They could've done something before the Svart came but they didn't!
Soon a horn rang: dumb, dumb…! And the Lios alpha ran into the fort to fight.

I soon realised that I was in the way of the gigantic battle, I was scared, too scared!
I spotted a gap but it always seemed move. There was no way out except from Death. So, I decided to die…!


Chapter five

 
Chapter six

Chapter 4: The Battle.

The battle was terrifying. There was flaming arrows from the Lios alpha to take out the Svart alpha one almost hit me. The Svart alpha through spears, daggers and shot arrows 10 minutes into the battle an arrow skimmed my leg and I let out a cry of death.
My sensitive ears heard the king of the Lios alpha say to Steve (the best archer they had). “Go steel the ring to save the unlucky stag!”
So he set out on his quest. And I was left to die for 30 minutes and I was wailing more and more. It was painful, really painful I even thought I would close my eyes.
 
Chapter seven

Chapter 5: The Ring.

Soon Steve found the sacred tree he drew his enchanted bow to see if someone followed him to the tree but no one did. He looked all-around him to see that no one saw him with their eagle eyes but there was no one.
He sprinted up the tree snatched the ring and ran away. On the way back Steve chanted, “Pauses the Svarts pause the Svarts pause the Svarts and heal the stag heal him heal him!”
When he got back the stag wasn't there! Then the king screamed “The stag went we can now battle again and we can save our treasure!”
I ,the stag, was on the hill behind them and I watched them fight.

But I'm now not a handsome, dashing, red deer I'm now an ugly old creaky stag; and that was my favourite adventure of all ever.


The end


By Jacob Searle
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