Header Image
Unlock
Are you sure you want to open the next chapter?

The Svarts Return! - Luke

Welcome to my storywalk I hope you enjoy it on the Quantock hills.

I hope you don't get stuck in the mud or you don't fall over the the twisty oak roots.

My storywalk is about a good elf called Callon and he gets attacked by the dark elves (the bad elves). Will he fight or will he lose? find out in my story.
ENJOY


By
Luke Cardwell

Age 10
 
Chapter one

The arrow

One day a Callon (a lios alfar elf) was strolling through the woods. Callon was picking berries for the squirrels at the massive entwined oak tree. It had ivy wrapping itself around it whilst the Svarts were underground planning an attack.

The oak tree had entwined ivy that wraps its self around it like a piece of string round a post. It also had star moss whimpering round the bottom of it. Also it has leaves weeping on the ground all soggy and mashed up.

The svart alfar were going to attack the lios alfar. They were going to fire a message arrow to Ladies combe. They fired the bamboo arrow. It shot thought the sky like a shooting star in a crystal clear night sky with a full moon. It shot thought into the trees and Callon herd a wail in the distance. So he set off
Chapter two

 
Chapter three

The prep

Callon found his wounded pal. Norgalador had a major wound to his left leg. It was weeping with blood as dark as the ace of spades with white flesh showing from the open wound. His trouser had a large hole that was torn and jagged.

Suddenly, he spotted a message attached to the arrow. It said “The svarts will come and attack you in two weeks.” They got worried.

Then Norgalador had an idea: an abyss! Imagine a big, dark and gloomy hole that never ended and was made of sheer granite. So he went to see wizard Samuel to make it. They decided to put the abyss at the end of the track on the right side of you.

Twenty minutes later Callon and Norgalador came back with Samuel and they wanted him to make the abyss. So he cast the spell on the end of the track. The spell shot into the ground like a stump buster at full speed blasting down and down and down. It was loud and powerful, earth-shaking and dynamic the spell tore up the Quantocks like a tornado.
Chapter four

 
Chapter five

The battle

A week later the svarts came and attack. But they had a dwarven sword! It could shoot out ray beams but they had started to wonder down the track where the abyss was.


“This is good news,” said Callon,” they are falling for it. That means we are going to win” said one of the lios alfar.


The svarts fell into the abyss. The yells and screams that was coming from the abyss are uncontrollably pain full to hear it is like a bunch of banshees screaming at the top of their voice. So the battle was won by the lios alfar.
Chapter six

 
Chapter seven

The beginning of the end

The dwarfven sword shot out blue ray beams that made the trees go blue and sparkly. That made them explode like a flare in action. The ray beams were indestructible. They were also blinding like a fresent glossy glow of a beacon. It was a shiny sword that glowed in the moonlight with a metallic glossy handle.


The dwarven sword had shot out a couple of trees. So the lios alfar got Samuel the wizard to make the trees bud and then they pick the buds off and plant them in the ground and watch them grow back to normal state.


The spell that Samuel cast on the forest was herbaceous. The green, see-through stalk shot out of his wand. The lios alfar could not believe their eyes. The trees started to bud. The embryo fell of and Callon picked them up and sprinkled them around. Then they grew and grew and grew again, then they were back to their normal state again.
 
Chapter eight

Keep on going!

Yor on the right track Keep on waking for the lasts chapter!
Chapter nine

 
Chapter ten

The end!

Two years later a message arrow hit the holly bush. It was a shiny arrow made from pure oak stem and feathers from the finest goose around the Quantocks. It had a pure steel head on it and a message attached that said, “We will be back soon.”
“Neah', that ‘a take em' a while to come an' attack again!” snarled one of the lios alfar.
Chapter eleven

Footer Image